The real screen shows a short situation, then two options side by side, each with a picture, a few details and a price. Here is one in that format, written by us.
Part 1 (60 seconds, no speaking). Your sister is starting university in September and wants a laptop. Choose the one you would recommend.
- Option A: 14-inch ultrabook. 1.2 kg. Battery about 12 hours. $1,150.
- Option B: 15.6-inch laptop with a large screen and a number pad. 2.1 kg. Battery about 6 hours. $780.
Part 2 (60 seconds to prepare, 60 to speak). Your sister says she prefers Option B. It is cheaper, and she says she will use it at her desk anyway. Persuade her that your option is better.
Notice what Part 2 adds: she has a reason. A good answer answers her reason, not just the price tag. Here is a 60-second answer that argues for the more expensive option, using the template on this page (140 words):
Hi Mina. I saw that you prefer the bigger laptop, and I understand why, because seven eighty is a lot less than eleven fifty. However, I think the ultrabook is the better choice for your first year.
First, about the price, yes, it costs three hundred and seventy dollars more. But you said you will work at your desk, and from what I remember of first year, you will not. You will be in the library, in lectures and on the bus, and that is where the twelve-hour battery and the one-point-two kilos matter.
Also, the bigger laptop weighs almost a kilo more. Carrying that across campus every day gets old by October.
Finally, even though the number pad is handy, a ten-dollar external one solves that.
So I really think the ultrabook is the one. What do you think?
What makes this answer work is what CELPIP's own rated samples for this task reward, in our reading of them: three reasons that build on each other instead of three separate complaints, specific details that go past what the screen says (library, bus, October), varied sentences, a warm tone, and a finish inside the minute. A weaker answer reads the two prices back, says the ultrabook is "better" twice and runs out of time on the third point.
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