Sample 1: Two-option, transit (169 words)
Prompt
Your city can add more bus-only lanes or reduce bus fares by 10%. Choose one and explain why it helps commuters more.
I support adding more bus-only lanes, because they cut travel time and make service reliable. Price matters, but people stop using buses when trips take too long or the schedule cannot be trusted.
First, dedicated lanes keep buses moving during rush hour. On Main Street, a trip that should take 20 minutes often becomes 40 because buses sit behind single-occupant cars. A bus lane would let them bypass that queue and stay on schedule.
Second, faster and more predictable trips bring in new riders. Commuters plan around time, not small savings. If the ride is quicker, more students and workers will leave the car at home, which reduces traffic for everyone.
A 10% fare cut does help people who already ride, and for someone on a tight budget that is real money every month. But a cheaper ticket does not make the bus arrive. When buses run late, people miss classes and shifts, and a discount does not repair that. For these reasons, bus-only lanes deliver the bigger benefit.
Angles: time and reliability, then people affected. The nod concedes that the fare cut genuinely helps someone specific, limits it, and redirects.




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