Goal
Tell a coherent, engaging story about a past event while demonstrating a wide range of tenses and complex sentence structures.
What the Examiner Looks For (Assessment Criteria)
- Structure (Coherence): They want to hear a clear narrative arc (Introduction, Background, Action, Conclusion).
- Grammar (Range): They are listening for a mix of past tenses. You must use Simple Past for the main story, Past Perfect (
had gone) plus Used to / Would to show depth (grammar boosters), and Present Perfect to connect the past to the present.
- Detail (Task Fulfillment): They check if you answer the "Wh-" questions (Who, What, Where, When, Why) and provide a meaningful reflection.
Step 1: The Opening
Goal: Introduce the topic clearly and connect your past experience to the present moment.
Grammar Booster: Present Perfect Tense
To start a story effectively, do not just say "I want to talk about...". Instead, use the Present Perfect to introduce the topic as a life experience. This bridges the gap between the past event and your current memory.
- Formula:
Subject + Have + Past Participle
- Keywords: have experienced, have visited, have faced
Structure
- The Hook: Introduce the general topic.
- The Specifics: Narrow it down to the specific event you will discuss.
- The Feeling: Briefly mention why it matters (memorable, challenging, etc.).
Example:
"I have earned money from various jobs in my life, but receiving my very first paycheck stands out as a proud memory. It is a moment I have cherished for many years."
Step 2: The Narrative Arc (The "3-Stage Story")
Goal: Tell the story in chronological order using three distinct grammar zones.
⚠️ Grammar: The Timeline of Tenses
You must show you can control time. Do not just use simple past ("I went, I saw, I did"). Use the table below to structure your story.
| Stage | Tense | Usage | Example |
|---|
| Context (Before) | Past Perfect | Actions that happened before the main story. | "I had never seen snow before." |
| Habit (Past) | Used to | Old states or actions that are no longer true. | "I used to be shy." (State)"I used to walk home." (Action) |
| Nostalgia (Past) | Would | Repeated actions in the past (often specifically for memories). | "My dad would always give me advice." |
| Action (During) | Simple Past | Used for Sequencing. It lists actions in order: A $\rightarrow$ B $\rightarrow$ C. | "I opened the envelope. Then, I saw the check and screamed with joy." |
| Reflection (After) | Present Perfect | How the event changed you (using Since). | "Since then, I have become brave." |
Grammar Alert: "Used to" vs. "Would"
Examiners love it when you use Would correctly for past memories, but you must be careful.
- Used to: Can be used for Actions ("I used to play") AND States ("I used to live here", "I used to be happy").
- Would: Can ONLY be used for Actions. You cannot use it for states.
- Correct: "We would play outside every day." (Action)
- Incorrect: "I
would live in London." (State) -> Must use "Used to live"
Stage 1: The Background (Context)
Use this to set the scene before the main action starts.
Grammar: Past Perfect + Used to / Would
- Rule: Before + Simple Past ... Subject + Had + Past Participle.
Structure:
- The Context: "Before I received that first paycheck, I had always asked my parents for cash whenever I wanted to buy something."
- The Habit (State): "To be honest, I used to be quite naive about money."
- The Habit (Action/Nostalgia): "I remember that I would always spend my allowance immediately on candy."
Stage 2: The Main Action (The Sequence)
Use this to tell the specific events of the day.
Grammar: Simple Past + Transition Words
- Rule: Use time markers like When, Immediately, Suddenly to connect the sequence.
Structure:
- The Turning Point: "However, that changed when I got my first job at a local café."
- The Reaction: "When I saw the deposit in my account, I felt incredibly accomplished."
- The Sequence: "I immediately went to the mall. Then, I bought a small gift for my mother to say thank you."
Stage 3: The Conclusion (The Reflection)
Use this to explain the significance of the story.
Grammar: Since + Present Perfect
- Rule: Since + Past Event ... Subject + Have + Past Participle.
Structure:
- The Lesson: "Since I started working, I have learned the true value of hard work and financial independence."
Step 3: The Closing
Goal: A quick, final sentence to wrap up the speech naturally.
Structure
- Rule: Bring the listener back to the present.
- Example: "That is why this experience remains so special to me."
CELPIP Speaking Part 2: Model Answer (Score 9+)
Task: Talk about the time you received your first paycheck.
Start of Response:
I have earned money from various jobs throughout my life, but receiving my very first paycheck stands out as a proud memory. Opening: Present Perfect Hook
Before I received that money, I had always asked my parents for cash whenever I wanted to buy something. Stage 1: Past Perfect (Context) To be honest, I used to be very dependent on them. I remember that every Friday, I would beg my father for extra pocket money. Stage 1: Used to (State) + Would (Action)
However, that changed when I got my first job at a local café. Stage 2: Simple Past Transition When I saw the deposit in my account, I felt incredibly accomplished. Stage 2: Reaction I immediately went to the mall. Then, I bought a small gift for my mother to say thank you. Stage 2: Simple Past Sequence
It was a small gesture, but it meant a lot to me. Since I started working, I have learned the true value of hard work and financial independence. Stage 3: Reflection with Since
That is why this day remains so special to me. Closing
Universal Templates
Step 1: The Opening (Build Your Intro)
Combine A + B to create your opening.
A. The General Statement
- "I have experienced many memorable moments in my life..."
- "I have faced several obstacles in my career..."
- "I have visited many interesting places..."
B. The Specific Hook (The "Stands Out" Sentence)
- "...but [Event Name] definitely stands out as the best one."
- "...but the time I [Action] is the one I remember most clearly."
- "...but [Event Name] remains the most significant memory for me."
Step 2: The Narrative Arc (Mix & Match)
Select one template from each stage to ensure flow.
Stage 1: The Background (Past Perfect / Used to / Would)
- "Before this experience, I had never realized how important [Topic] was."
- "Actually, I used to be quite [Adjective] because I didn't know better."
- "Back then, I would often [Action] without thinking about the consequences."
Stage 2: The Action (Simple Past + Transitions)
- "However, everything changed when [Event Happened]."
- "The moment I [Action], I immediately felt a rush of [Emotion]."
- "I remember clearly that I [Action] and then I [Action]."
Stage 3: The Reflection (Since + Present Perfect)
- "Since that day, I have learned a valuable lesson about [Topic]."
- "Since that experience, I have changed my perspective completely."
- "Ever since then, I have become more [Adjective: confident/patient/grateful]."
Step 3: The Closing
Keep it short and meaningful.
- "It was truly a life-changing experience."
- "I will never forget that day."
- "That is why I still think about it today."